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Date: Thu, 2 Nov 2023 20:28:00 +0000
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by: W.Dockery - Thu, 2 Nov 2023 20:28 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Irene's Painted Rocks

>> Irene's painted rocks
>> I still keep them
>> in my desk drawer
>> she gave me a few.

>> Some were seaweed green
>> some ferrous oxide red
>> others sky blue.

>> When fourteen years later
>> our code of silence
>> was broken down.

>> We were to meet
>> as she passed through town
>> before I learned
>> she'd gone underground.

>> This was to be
>> in early Springtime
>> so I collected several rocks for her.

>> We said goodbye forever
>> gave ourselves a pardon.
>> Like old Connery said
>> "Never say never again."

>> -Will Dockery (2020)

>> ----
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2022/06/irenes-painted-rocks.html

> An old fave exceptionally well written...

Thanks again for the feedback.

😃

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by: General-Zod - Mon, 4 Dec 2023 23:37 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>> Irene's Painted Rocks

>>> Irene's painted rocks
>>> I still keep them
>>> in my desk drawer
>>> she gave me a few.

>>> Some were seaweed green
>>> some ferrous oxide red
>>> others sky blue.

>>> When fourteen years later
>>> our code of silence
>>> was broken down.

>>> We were to meet
>>> as she passed through town
>>> before I learned
>>> she'd gone underground.

>>> This was to be
>>> in early Springtime
>>> so I collected several rocks for her.

>>> We said goodbye forever
>>> gave ourselves a pardon.
>>> Like old Connery said
>>> "Never say never again."

>>> -Will Dockery (2020)

>>> ----
>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2022/06/irenes-painted-rocks.html

>> An old fave exceptionally well written...

> Thanks again for the feedback.

Yo...!

Poetry lover that I be, was glad tuh...!

Blame Saint Andreas -- it's all his fault.

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Re: Irene's Painted Rocks / Will Dockery	W.Dockery
Re: Irene's Painted Rocks / Will Dockery	General-Zod