On Thursday, September 7, 2023 at 5:37:28 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Sensitive One
>
> When we were young
> when we were cool.

This is not a sentence. "When we were young" sets the time for the sentence.. It lacks both a subject and a verb.
A sentence would be "When we were young, we were cool." The second "we" is the subject and "were" is the verb. Without a subject and a verb, you haven't got a sentence.

> That pancake thick mask
> made you look like a fool.

This appears to be the missing portion of the above-noted sentence fragment..

Again, I refer you to the General Rule of Thumb when writing poetry: check each line by writing it in sentence form.

"When we were young, that pancake thick mask made you look like a fool."

This is a sentence. The "mask" is the subject, and "made" is the verb.

We can expand this to the awkward: "When we were young (when we were cool), that pancake thick mask made you look like a fool." Why you saw fit to break this into one sentence and a fragment, is anybody's guess. Here's mine:

Wearing a "pancake thick mask" (whatever that is) has got nothing to do with youth or with being cool. As such, the two opening fragments don't apply to it -- so you chopped what would have been a nonsensical sentence into a sentence and a fragment.

More correctly, you were unable to complete your opening thought ("When we were young and cool we did...").

I suspect that much of the problem is caused by this "poem's" doing double duty as a song lyric -- thereby forcing it to have a loose meter and occasional rhymes.

I'm guessing that the person being addressed is a girl who wore too much makeup (the "pancake thick mask"). You can get away with such grammatical atrocities in a rock song, where the lyric is not the primary focus of the work -- music, mood, and performance are more important. However, when set in poem form, where the lyric has to stand by itself, it needs to be both grammatically correct and to express itself in a clear a manner as possible.

When I say that your writing is "unintelligible" I usually mean in the grammatical context.

(There are two ways in which writing can be "unintelligible." The first is in the surrealist poetry of Dental Rivers and PJR, where the meaning has been intentionally obscured to such a point that no one can make any sense out of it. The second is in cases like the above, where the general idea comes across, but the actual "sentences" are so riddled with errors that they cannot be read *literally.*)

In a rock song lyric, sentence fragments, poorly defined concepts, non-linear narrative, etc., are acceptable. In a poem, they are not. If you want to publish your song lyrics as poetry, you need to rewrite them in a grammatically correct manner, wherein the *literal* meaning of the words clearly express the idea you're trying to convey.

Otherwise, publish them *as* song lyrics. Song lyrics are a minor form of poetry, where (and this is important) the grammatical requirements are less exacting.

> Got a stash in my mind
> so I can get higher
> than you'll ever be.

Technically, this should begin with a *subject.* E.g., "I've got a stash...".

Because poetry is a *written word* form the rules of grammar necessarily apply.

In this case, we can make an allowance for this, on the pretense that the speaker is doing so in the vernacular.

> Pentagrams and cages
> pretending to be
> a slave of Thoth
> you see.

"You see" serves not purpose other than to force a rhyme off of "to be." The end result is what I refer to as "sing-song" -- a rhyme so forced that it's embarrassing to read, much less to have written.

At this point, the narrative (such as it is) has lost any semblance of progression or direction. When you were young and cool, someone wore too much makeup that made her (or him) look foolish; you did a *lot* of drugs; and locked yourselves in cages pretending to be slaves of Thoth.

From a grammatical standpoint, you're saying that the pentagrams and cages were pretending to be slaves of Thoth. Again, I can figure out what you mean: You drew/wore pentagrams and locked yourselves in cages, pretending to be slaves of Thoth. But this doesn't change the fact that it's grammatically unintelligible (cages can't pretend to be slaves).

> I know you have courage
> and you're a midget
> just for me.
> And he, he's the owl
> and sees everything.

Again, the narrative is virtually nonexistent. What courage does the person being addressed show? How does one become a midget for someone else (as an expression of love)? And where did the mysterious, owllike "he" come from?

This reads like some random thoughts you would have scribbled after having watched an episode of Twin Peaks while stoned out of your mind.

At this point, your poem has become unintelligible in the sense of narrative/content as well as grammatically.

> Disco salsa
> a load of lumpy love
> from a casualty
> in the battles of love.

Disco salsa (whatever that is) is a load of lumpy love (whatever that is)?

I sincerely doubt that anyone (General Zod excepted) is still reading you poem at this point. It grammatically incompetent, doesn't make a lick of sense, and reads like the incoherent ramblings of a drug-addled mind. Who would read this sort of stuff?

> Under reconstruction
> by the good grace of the King.

*What* is under reconstruction? You cannot have a sentence without a subject.

> By his consent
> you bestow on me
> your magnanimous love.

*With* his consent.

What is "magnanimous love"? Who speaks that way?

> Ghost of Cortez the Killer
> a spontaneous Hitler.

This is not a sentence, as it lacks a verb.

Who is "Cortez the Killer"? What is his ghost doing turning up in the middle of the speaker's drug trip?

> The mystic ringed
> an industrial collapse.

This is not a sentence, as it lacks both a subject and a verb. The two lines don't even appear to be related. What does "mystic ringed" mean? It doesn't even suggest anything to me. What industry collapsed? Is this a pretentious way of saying that the mill shut down? (Not that anyone reading this poem would know that you once worked in a mill.)

I suppose this would still work as a song lyric, as it is only a little more nonsensical than some of Jim Morrison's drug-fueled ravings in "The End." It does not, however, work as a poem.

> Like a rolling snowball
> come feel my nature.

How does a rolling snowball feel your nature (whatever that means)?

I don't know what you were trying to express here, but you're asking someone to feel your nature the same way that a rolling snowball feels it.

> Let's come simultaneously
> rebuked and accumulating karma.

Are you inviting someone to orgasm at the same time as you? Or are you inviting them to arrive someplace simultaneously rebuked by... something? How does one accumulate karma (good or bad?) by being rebuked or by sharing an orgasm?

> It was a lot of fun
> but just one of those things.

No, that's "It was great fun, but it was just one of those things."

Were you tripping to a Fred and Ginger musical?

> Sit around on Nebraska Street
> and just stew.

Are you telling someone to sit around and stew?

> Your ice cream from Venus
> on my lips.

This sentence fragment lacks a verb. Is "ice cream from Venus" a reference to cum? If so, wouldn't it be warm and salty (as opposed to being like ice cream)?

> I must see you tonight
> love me
> I am the sensitive one.

This is three sentences (or near-sentences).

How has the speaker shown himself to be sensitive?

He comes across like a drug-addled douchebag -- full of Gothboi posturing, and only interested in sex.

> -Will Dockery

Was this inspired by "Dan Barf's" "I Am Darkness" poem? They read like companion pieces.

This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.

On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.

Will didn't used to be so sensitive.

It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.

Michael Pendragon
"Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
-- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt

On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
>
> It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
>
> Michael Pendragon
> "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt

"VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."

Michael Pendragon
"this isn't about the 'victims', dockery. this isn't about the freedom of speech,
this is about my calling your wretched writing shit. you cannot defend your own
shitty writing, so now you use slander and lies to in some attempt to try and
get me to stop telling you the truth about your writing.
sorry, dockery, you write shit. it's that simple. all the lies in the world
aren't going to stop the fact that you write shit.
why must you bother people in other newsgroups because you can't handle the
truth? you write shit. why does this upset you so?"
-- j.r. sherman

On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> >
> > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> >
> > Michael Pendragon
> > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."

It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).

Michael Pendragon
"I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
-- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt

On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > >
> > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > >
> > > Michael Pendragon
> > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
>
>
> Michael Pendragon
> "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
>

On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 8:19:10 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > > >
> > > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > > >
> > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional.."
> > > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> > It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
> >
> >
> > Michael Pendragon
> > "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> > -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> >
>

On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:58:34 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 8:19:10 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > > > >
> > > > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > > > >
> > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > > > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> > > It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
> > >
> > >
> > > Michael Pendragon
> > > "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> > > -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > >
> >
>

On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:54:35 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:58:34 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 8:19:10 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > > > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > > > > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> > > > It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> > > > -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

On Wednesday, November 22, 2023 at 12:54:43 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:54:35 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:58:34 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 8:19:10 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > > > > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > > > > > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > > > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> > > > > It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> > > > > -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

On Wednesday, November 22, 2023 at 3:39:05 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Wednesday, November 22, 2023 at 12:54:43 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:54:35 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:58:34 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 8:19:10 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > > > > > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > > > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > > > > > > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > > > > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> > > > > > It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > > "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> > > > > > -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

On Thursday, November 23, 2023 at 1:56:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Wednesday, November 22, 2023 at 3:39:05 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Wednesday, November 22, 2023 at 12:54:43 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:54:35 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 9:58:34 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Tuesday, November 21, 2023 at 8:19:10 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > On Monday, November 20, 2023 at 11:55:54 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 10:24:17 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 4:52:16 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > > > On Sunday, November 19, 2023 at 8:04:33 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > This review has been reposted to show that Will Dockery (Will Donkey) is the worst poet who's ever lived.
> > > > > > > > > Will didn't used to be so sensitive.
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > It was only after he contracted syphilis from Joey Stout.
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > > > > > "Now it turns out that Waffle House is open until nine at night, which is a major change from the open all night schedule that was traditional."
> > > > > > > > > -- Will Dockery, discussing poetry.
> > > > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > > > > > "VD" is actually shorthand for "Very Dockery."
> > > > > > > It's also short for "Vinyl Dog" (Will's nickname when he was boning Vinyl Cat).
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Michael Pendragon
> > > > > > > "I know an obsessed teollisuuden Wien I see one."
> > > > > > > -- Will Dockery, dry drunk.
> > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > https://imgur.com/gallery/rtvGMMt
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn

Nuff said.

On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
>
> Nuff said.
>

On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > >
> > > Nuff said.
> > >
> Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
>
> Nuff said.
>

On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > >
> > > > Nuff said.
> > > >
> > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> >
> > Nuff said.
> >
>

On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > >
> > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > >
> > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > >
> > > Nuff said.
> > >
> >
>

On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > >
> > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > >
> > > > Nuff said.
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > >
> > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 1:51:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > c
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >

They say you can't judge a book by its cover... but in some cases, you can:

Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn

On Tuesday, November 28, 2023 at 9:00:34 AM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 1:51:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > c
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> They say you can't judge a book by its cover... but in some cases, you can:
> Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
>

On Tuesday, November 28, 2023 at 9:00:34 PM UTC+7, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 1:51:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > c
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> They say you can't judge a book by its cover... but in some cases, you can:
> Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
Don't forget: https://imgur.com/a/COojGjB

On Wednesday, November 29, 2023 at 4:24:48 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> On Tuesday, November 28, 2023 at 9:00:34 PM UTC+7, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 1:51:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > c
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > They say you can't judge a book by its cover... but in some cases, you can:
> > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> Don't forget: https://imgur.com/a/COojGjB

I hadn't seen that one. Is Stinky losing his hair as well?

On Thursday, November 30, 2023 at 4:10:05 PM UTC-3, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Wednesday, November 29, 2023 at 4:24:48 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > On Tuesday, November 28, 2023 at 9:00:34 PM UTC+7, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 1:51:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > > c
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > They say you can't judge a book by its cover... but in some cases, you can:
> > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > Don't forget: https://imgur.com/a/COojGjB
> I hadn't seen that one. Is Stinky losing his hair as well?

The brain is the first to go, then the hair. Teeth last a long time after the body rots, but of course George Sulzbach doesn't have any teeth. https://imgur.com/a/COojGjB

On Thursday, November 30, 2023 at 7:17:20 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> On Thursday, November 30, 2023 at 4:10:05 PM UTC-3, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Wednesday, November 29, 2023 at 4:24:48 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, November 28, 2023 at 9:00:34 PM UTC+7, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 1:51:59 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > On Monday, November 27, 2023 at 8:41:23 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 8:51:02 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 6:34:45 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 10:31:37 PM UTC-5, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > > > > > > On Saturday, November 25, 2023 at 11:23:35 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 2:39:53 PM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > > On Friday, November 24, 2023 at 10:00:42 AM UTC-5, Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > > > c
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > > > > > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > Nuff said.
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > They say you can't judge a book by its cover... but in some cases, you can:
> > > > Will Donkey: https://imgur.com/gallery/dpR2ESh
> > > > Stinky George: https://imgur.com/a/7c0WITn
> > > Don't forget: https://imgur.com/a/COojGjB
> > I hadn't seen that one. Is Stinky losing his hair as well?
> The brain is the first to go, then the hair. Teeth last a long time after the body rots, but of course George Sulzbach doesn't have any teeth. https://imgur.com/a/COojGjB
Since his brain, hair, and teeth are all gone, what's Stinky got to look forward to?