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by: Faraway Star - Sun, 26 Nov 2023 21:16 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Exile
>
> Christmas morning 1995
> about six months
> into exile
> still some hope
> and a whole lot of love.
>
> Delivery of presents
> Santa myth trashed
> for my children
> not my design
> against my will.
>
> Got the okay to stop by
> I step in from another world
> bearing gifts
> smiles to mask
> my smashed heart.
>
> Memory and dreams
> this may pass
> but the final statement
> the final fuck off gesture
> to me.
>
> Proof that I was no longer real
> I no longer belonged
> was not that
> I didn't get a gift
> not a single one.
>
> But when I asked her
> she said she had
> given him a shirt.
>
> Black day
> December 25 1995
> I sucked it up
> smiled at the kids
> with holiday toys
> tried to hide
> my nightmare of pain.
>
> Sat in my old spot
> north side if the sofa
> smiled a goodbye
> and walked away into the bog
> the moor
> to Shadowville,
> already dead inside
> never to return.
>
> -Will Dockery

Outstanding holiday poem...!

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by: Faraway Star - Mon, 27 Nov 2023 21:08 UTC

On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
> Faraway Star wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > > > Exile
> > > >
> > > > Christmas morning 1995
> > > > about six months
> > > > into exile
> > > > still some hope
> > > > and a whole lot of love.
> > > >
> > > > Delivery of presents
> > > > Santa myth trashed
> > > > for my children
> > > > not my design
> > > > against my will.
> > > >
> > > > Got the okay to stop by
> > > > I step in from another world
> > > > bearing gifts
> > > > smiles to mask
> > > > my smashed heart.
> > > >
> > > > Memory and dreams
> > > > this may pass
> > > > but the final statement
> > > > the final fuck off gesture
> > > > to me.
> > > >
> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
> > > > I no longer belonged
> > > > was not that
> > > > I didn't get a gift
> > > > not a single one.
> > > >
> > > > But when I asked her
> > > > she said she had
> > > > given him a shirt.
> > > >
> > > > Black day
> > > > December 25 1995
> > > > I sucked it up
> > > > smiled at the kids
> > > > with holiday toys
> > > > tried to hide
> > > > my nightmare of pain.
> > > >
> > > > Sat in my old spot
> > > > north side if the sofa
> > > > smiled a goodbye
> > > > and walked away into the bog
> > > > the moor
> > > > to Shadowville,
> > > > already dead inside
> > > > never to return.
> > > >
> > > > -Will Dockery
> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
> Had time to get this one posted:
>
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

Outstanding poetry....!

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by: W.Dockery - Fri, 1 Dec 2023 04:06 UTC

Faraway Star wrote:

> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Faraway Star wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>> >
>> > > > Exile
>> > > >
>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>> > > > about six months
>> > > > into exile
>> > > > still some hope
>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>> > > >
>> > > > Delivery of presents
>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>> > > > for my children
>> > > > not my design
>> > > > against my will.
>> > > >
>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>> > > > I step in from another world
>> > > > bearing gifts
>> > > > smiles to mask
>> > > > my smashed heart.
>> > > >
>> > > > Memory and dreams
>> > > > this may pass
>> > > > but the final statement
>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>> > > > to me.
>> > > >
>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>> > > > I no longer belonged
>> > > > was not that
>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>> > > > not a single one.
>> > > >
>> > > > But when I asked her
>> > > > she said she had
>> > > > given him a shirt.
>> > > >
>> > > > Black day
>> > > > December 25 1995
>> > > > I sucked it up
>> > > > smiled at the kids
>> > > > with holiday toys
>> > > > tried to hide
>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>> > > >
>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>> > > > north side if the sofa
>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>> > > > the moor
>> > > > to Shadowville,
>> > > > already dead inside
>> > > > never to return.
>> > > >
>> > > > -Will Dockery
>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

> Outstanding poetry....!

Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Sun, 3 Dec 2023 19:52 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Faraway Star wrote:

>> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>>> Faraway Star wrote:
>>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>> >
>>> > > > Exile
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>>> > > > about six months
>>> > > > into exile
>>> > > > still some hope
>>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Delivery of presents
>>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>>> > > > for my children
>>> > > > not my design
>>> > > > against my will.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>>> > > > I step in from another world
>>> > > > bearing gifts
>>> > > > smiles to mask
>>> > > > my smashed heart.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Memory and dreams
>>> > > > this may pass
>>> > > > but the final statement
>>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>>> > > > to me.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>>> > > > I no longer belonged
>>> > > > was not that
>>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>>> > > > not a single one.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > But when I asked her
>>> > > > she said she had
>>> > > > given him a shirt.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Black day
>>> > > > December 25 1995
>>> > > > I sucked it up
>>> > > > smiled at the kids
>>> > > > with holiday toys
>>> > > > tried to hide
>>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>>> > > > north side if the sofa
>>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>>> > > > the moor
>>> > > > to Shadowville,
>>> > > > already dead inside
>>> > > > never to return.
>>> > > >
>>> > > > -Will Dockery
>>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>>
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

>> Outstanding poetry....!

> Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

Hae a groovy day, sir...!

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by: W.Dockery - Thu, 7 Dec 2023 18:58 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Faraway Star wrote:

>>> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>>>> Faraway Star wrote:
>>>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>>> >
>>>> > > > Exile
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>>>> > > > about six months
>>>> > > > into exile
>>>> > > > still some hope
>>>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Delivery of presents
>>>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>>>> > > > for my children
>>>> > > > not my design
>>>> > > > against my will.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>>>> > > > I step in from another world
>>>> > > > bearing gifts
>>>> > > > smiles to mask
>>>> > > > my smashed heart.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Memory and dreams
>>>> > > > this may pass
>>>> > > > but the final statement
>>>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>>>> > > > to me.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>>>> > > > I no longer belonged
>>>> > > > was not that
>>>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>>>> > > > not a single one.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > But when I asked her
>>>> > > > she said she had
>>>> > > > given him a shirt.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Black day
>>>> > > > December 25 1995
>>>> > > > I sucked it up
>>>> > > > smiled at the kids
>>>> > > > with holiday toys
>>>> > > > tried to hide
>>>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>>>> > > > north side if the sofa
>>>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>>>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>>>> > > > the moor
>>>> > > > to Shadowville,
>>>> > > > already dead inside
>>>> > > > never to return.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > -Will Dockery
>>>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>>>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>>>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>>>
>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

>>> Outstanding poetry....!

>> Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

> Hae a groovy day, sir...!

Hello there my friend.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Sat, 9 Dec 2023 20:10 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> Faraway Star wrote:

>>>> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>> Faraway Star wrote:
>>>>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>> >
>>>>> > > > Exile
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>>>>> > > > about six months
>>>>> > > > into exile
>>>>> > > > still some hope
>>>>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Delivery of presents
>>>>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>>>>> > > > for my children
>>>>> > > > not my design
>>>>> > > > against my will.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>>>>> > > > I step in from another world
>>>>> > > > bearing gifts
>>>>> > > > smiles to mask
>>>>> > > > my smashed heart.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Memory and dreams
>>>>> > > > this may pass
>>>>> > > > but the final statement
>>>>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>>>>> > > > to me.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>>>>> > > > I no longer belonged
>>>>> > > > was not that
>>>>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>>>>> > > > not a single one.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > But when I asked her
>>>>> > > > she said she had
>>>>> > > > given him a shirt.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Black day
>>>>> > > > December 25 1995
>>>>> > > > I sucked it up
>>>>> > > > smiled at the kids
>>>>> > > > with holiday toys
>>>>> > > > tried to hide
>>>>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>>>>> > > > north side if the sofa
>>>>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>>>>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>>>>> > > > the moor
>>>>> > > > to Shadowville,
>>>>> > > > already dead inside
>>>>> > > > never to return.
>>>>> > > >
>>>>> > > > -Will Dockery
>>>>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>>>>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>>>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>>>>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>>>>
>>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

>>>> Outstanding poetry....!

>>> Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

>> Hae a groovy day, sir...!

> Hello there my friend.

> 🙂

Yo...

Good day once more...!

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by: W.Dockery - Tue, 12 Dec 2023 06:49 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> General-Zod wrote:

>>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>>> Faraway Star wrote:

>>>>> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>> Faraway Star wrote:
>>>>>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > > > Exile
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>>>>>> > > > about six months
>>>>>> > > > into exile
>>>>>> > > > still some hope
>>>>>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Delivery of presents
>>>>>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>>>>>> > > > for my children
>>>>>> > > > not my design
>>>>>> > > > against my will.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>>>>>> > > > I step in from another world
>>>>>> > > > bearing gifts
>>>>>> > > > smiles to mask
>>>>>> > > > my smashed heart.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Memory and dreams
>>>>>> > > > this may pass
>>>>>> > > > but the final statement
>>>>>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>>>>>> > > > to me.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>>>>>> > > > I no longer belonged
>>>>>> > > > was not that
>>>>>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>>>>>> > > > not a single one.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > But when I asked her
>>>>>> > > > she said she had
>>>>>> > > > given him a shirt.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Black day
>>>>>> > > > December 25 1995
>>>>>> > > > I sucked it up
>>>>>> > > > smiled at the kids
>>>>>> > > > with holiday toys
>>>>>> > > > tried to hide
>>>>>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>>>>>> > > > north side if the sofa
>>>>>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>>>>>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>>>>>> > > > the moor
>>>>>> > > > to Shadowville,
>>>>>> > > > already dead inside
>>>>>> > > > never to return.
>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>> > > > -Will Dockery
>>>>>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>>>>>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>>>>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>>>>>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

>>>>> Outstanding poetry....!

>>>> Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

>>> Hae a groovy day, sir...!

>> Hello there my friend.

>> 🙂

> Yo...

> Good day once more...!

Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Thu, 14 Dec 2023 22:11 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> Faraway Star wrote:

>>>>>> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>>> Faraway Star wrote:
>>>>>>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> > > > Exile
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>>>>>>> > > > about six months
>>>>>>> > > > into exile
>>>>>>> > > > still some hope
>>>>>>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Delivery of presents
>>>>>>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>>>>>>> > > > for my children
>>>>>>> > > > not my design
>>>>>>> > > > against my will.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>>>>>>> > > > I step in from another world
>>>>>>> > > > bearing gifts
>>>>>>> > > > smiles to mask
>>>>>>> > > > my smashed heart.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Memory and dreams
>>>>>>> > > > this may pass
>>>>>>> > > > but the final statement
>>>>>>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>>>>>>> > > > to me.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>>>>>>> > > > I no longer belonged
>>>>>>> > > > was not that
>>>>>>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>>>>>>> > > > not a single one.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > But when I asked her
>>>>>>> > > > she said she had
>>>>>>> > > > given him a shirt.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Black day
>>>>>>> > > > December 25 1995
>>>>>>> > > > I sucked it up
>>>>>>> > > > smiled at the kids
>>>>>>> > > > with holiday toys
>>>>>>> > > > tried to hide
>>>>>>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>>>>>>> > > > north side if the sofa
>>>>>>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>>>>>>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>>>>>>> > > > the moor
>>>>>>> > > > to Shadowville,
>>>>>>> > > > already dead inside
>>>>>>> > > > never to return.
>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>> > > > -Will Dockery
>>>>>>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>>>>>>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>>>>>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>>>>>>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

>>>>>> Outstanding poetry....!

>>>>> Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

>>>> Hae a groovy day, sir...!

>>> Hello there my friend.

>>> 🙂

>> Yo...

>> Good day once more...!

> Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

> 🙂

Good day

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by: W.Dockery - Sat, 23 Dec 2023 03:08 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> General-Zod wrote:

>>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>>> Faraway Star wrote:

>>>>>>> On Sunday, November 26, 2023 at 7:45:06 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>>>> Faraway Star wrote:
>>>>>>>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>>> > > > Exile
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Christmas morning 1995
>>>>>>>> > > > about six months
>>>>>>>> > > > into exile
>>>>>>>> > > > still some hope
>>>>>>>> > > > and a whole lot of love.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Delivery of presents
>>>>>>>> > > > Santa myth trashed
>>>>>>>> > > > for my children
>>>>>>>> > > > not my design
>>>>>>>> > > > against my will.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Got the okay to stop by
>>>>>>>> > > > I step in from another world
>>>>>>>> > > > bearing gifts
>>>>>>>> > > > smiles to mask
>>>>>>>> > > > my smashed heart.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Memory and dreams
>>>>>>>> > > > this may pass
>>>>>>>> > > > but the final statement
>>>>>>>> > > > the final fuck off gesture
>>>>>>>> > > > to me.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Proof that I was no longer real
>>>>>>>> > > > I no longer belonged
>>>>>>>> > > > was not that
>>>>>>>> > > > I didn't get a gift
>>>>>>>> > > > not a single one.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > But when I asked her
>>>>>>>> > > > she said she had
>>>>>>>> > > > given him a shirt.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Black day
>>>>>>>> > > > December 25 1995
>>>>>>>> > > > I sucked it up
>>>>>>>> > > > smiled at the kids
>>>>>>>> > > > with holiday toys
>>>>>>>> > > > tried to hide
>>>>>>>> > > > my nightmare of pain.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > Sat in my old spot
>>>>>>>> > > > north side if the sofa
>>>>>>>> > > > smiled a goodbye
>>>>>>>> > > > and walked away into the bog
>>>>>>>> > > > the moor
>>>>>>>> > > > to Shadowville,
>>>>>>>> > > > already dead inside
>>>>>>>> > > > never to return.
>>>>>>>> > > >
>>>>>>>> > > > -Will Dockery
>>>>>>>> > > Outstanding holiday poem...!
>>>>>>>> > Good find, Zod, this one is going in the Shadowville Mythos blog today.
>>>>>>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/
>>>>>>>> Had time to get this one posted:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/11/exile.html?m=1

> Yo

> Good day

Hello there my friend, thanks again for reading and commenting.

🙂

I exist, therefore I am paid.

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Re: Exile / Will Dockery	General-Zod
Re: Exile / Will Dockery	W.Dockery