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Re: Dandelions / Zod (final edit)

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Subject: Re: Dandelions / Zod (final edit)
Date: Thu, 15 Feb 2024 21:38:39 +0000
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by: General-Zod - Thu, 15 Feb 2024 21:38 UTC

George J. Dance wrote:
>
> Yes, I know we all read "Dandelions" over and over again yesterday; but I wanted to give the man a clean, finished copy he can use to c&p or bump in the future (and let his earlier drafts get buried). Besides the change to 4 poems, one per season, I made two changes that didn't get into previous drafts: pluralizing "bringers" and making "campfire" one word.
>

> The entire "good" side

How'd do and good day...

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