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Re: Unreal Awakening / poem by Zod

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Date: Thu, 15 Feb 2024 22:48:52 +0000
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by: General-Zod - Thu, 15 Feb 2024 22:48 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
>Zod wrote:
>
>> >> > Unreal Awakening
>> >> >
>> >> > Like in a television
>> >> > commercial
>> >> > where flowers bloom
>> >> > and everyone sings
>> >> > a merry melody.
>> >> >
>> >> > Picnics on green grasses
>> >> > while others die
>> >> > on red desert sands.
>> >> >
>> >> > Government scandals
>> >> > church-goers in sandals
>> >> > cover the smell
>> >> > with Indian incense
>> >> > look away from
>> >> > the chaos.
>> >> >
>> >> > Big brass monkey
>> >> > smiling from the pulpit.
>> >> >
>> >> > --Zod
>> >> >
>> >> > *********************
>> >> Beastie Boys homage at the end?
>> >>
>> >> Excellent nod to modern Hip Hop poetry.

Yep, yo, and right on

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