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Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery

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by: General-Zod - Fri, 9 Feb 2024 22:46 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Apple Montage

> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.

> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.

> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.

> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.

> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.

> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.

> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.

> -Will Dockery

> ***

Yo... again, kool read...

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by: W.Dockery - Mon, 11 Mar 2024 07:48 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Apple Montage

>> Sneaking around
>> with Cousin Jenny,
>> smoking menthol
>> beyond the sheds.

>> Late summer vacation 1973
>> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

>> To the right
>> behind the barn
>> were apple trees.

>> There were several
>> of those trees
>> and other trees
>> behind them
>> beyond a field
>> and behind them, other trees.

>> Later, I stood near
>> as a crowd
>> watched Pops and my Uncle
>> cooking apple butter;
>> stirring the brown gunk,
>> boiling in a huge black kettle.

>> I saw my father
>> secretly pass
>> a wine bottle
>> to my Uncle Clarence.

>> I went from
>> breathing cold mist
>> out back behind the barn,
>> to breathing
>> the hot misty steam.

>> The air smelled of apple fumes
>> and strong booze.

>> -Will Dockery

>> ***

> Yo... again, kool read...

Thanks again.

A man's house is his castle. -- Sir Edward Coke

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Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery	General-Zod
Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery	W.Dockery