later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

cheesetray wrote:

> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i think)

cheesetray wrote:
> cheesetray wrote:
>
>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>
> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i
> think)
>
hi rachel

cheesetray wrote:

>

>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i think)

Hi there, will enjoy reading more poetry from you....!

> cheesetray wrote:
> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

Looking forward to reading them.

This is a response to the post seen at:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=661611552#661611552

cheesetray wrote:

> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

Would enjoy reading them Rachel

Jordy wrote:

> cheesetray wrote:

>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

> Would enjoy reading them Rachel

I'm agreeable to that...!

> cheesetray wrote:
> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

Looking forward to reading those.

This is a response to the post seen at:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=661611552#661611552

Will-Dockery wrote:
>
> > cheesetray wrote:
> > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>
>
>
> Looking forward to reading those.
>
>
Has Rachel aka cheesetray asked you to piss on
her head yet? She asked me to and I said no.

William Price wrote:

> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > cheesetray wrote:
>> > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>
>>
>>
>> Looking forward to reading those.
>>
>>
> Has Rachel aka cheesetray

Never a shortage of trolls here, of course.

😏

W.Dockery wrote:
> William Price wrote:
>
>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>>
>>>   > cheesetray wrote:
>>>   > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Looking forward to reading those.
>>>
>> Has Rachel aka cheesetray asked you to piss on
>> her head yet? She asked me to and I said no.
>
> Never a shortage of trolls here, of course.
>
> 😏
>
>
What troll? It's an honest question.

William Price wrote:

> W.Dockery wrote:
>> William Price wrote:
>>
>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>>>
>>>>   > cheesetray wrote:
>>>>   > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Looking forward to reading those.
>>>>
>>> Has Rachel aka cheesetray

xxxxxx
>>
>> Never a shortage of trolls here, of course.
>>
>
> What troll? It's an honest question.

Like I said.

😃

W.Dockery wrote:
> William Price wrote:
>
>> W.Dockery wrote:
>>> William Price wrote:
>>>
>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>   > cheesetray wrote:
>>>>>   > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Looking forward to reading those.
>>>>>
>>>> Has Rachel aka cheesetray asked you to piss on
>>> her head yet? She asked me to and I said no.
>>>
>>> Never a shortage of trolls here, of course.
>>>
>>
>> What troll? It's an honest question.
>
> Like I said.
>
>
You haven't said shit except for hello to your pissbum
buddy too many times every day, asshat.

William Price wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> William Price wrote:
>>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>>>   > cheesetray wrote:
>>>>>>   > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Looking forward to reading those.
>>>>>>
>>>>> Has Rachel aka Cheesetray
xxxxxxxc xxxxxxxc
xxxxxxxc xxxxxxxc xxxxxxxc
>>>>
>>>> Never a shortage of trolls here, of course.
>>>>
>>>
>>> What troll? It's an honest question.
>>
>> Like I said.
>>
>>
> You haven't said

I nailed you for the troll you are, for starters.

HTH and HAND.

W.Dockery wrote:
> William Price wrote:
>
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>> William Price wrote:
>>>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>
>>>>>>>   > cheesetray wrote:
>>>>>>>   > later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Looking forward to reading those.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>> Has Rachel aka Cheesetray > asked you to piss on
>>>>>> her head yet? She asked me to and I said no.

>>>>>
>>>>> Never a shortage of trolls here, of course.
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>> What troll? It's an honest question.
>>>
>>> Like I said.
>>>
>>>
>> You haven't said shit except for hello to your pissbum
> buddy too many times every day, asshat.
>
> I nailed you for the troll you are, for starters.
>
> HTH and HAND.
>
>
All you can do is post edit, you brainless turd. Stick to endlessly
saying hello to your homeless pissbum pals, pissbum.

cheesetray wrote:

>

>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i think)

Never mind the troll, post your poetry, Rachel.

😏

W.Dockery wrote:
>> cheesetray wrote:
>>
>>>
>>
>>>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !
>>
>>> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision
>>> (i think)
>>
>>
> Never mind the troll, post your poetry, Rachel.
>
> 😏
>
>
>
>
> have him piss on your head too, rachel

Will Dockery wrote:

> cheesetray wrote:

>>

>>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

>> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i think)

> Never mind the troll, post your poetry, Rachel.

> 😏

Agreed and seconded....!

make that three (another revised)

cheesetray wrote:
> make that three (another revised)
>
do you like fromunda cheese

cheesetray wrote:

>

>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i think)

Bring it on...!

General-Zod wrote:

> cheesetray wrote:

>>

>>> later...coming soon...it depends on how i'ma feelin'....uh !

>> two new arrangement that is: one replacement, one permanent revision (i think)

> Bring it on...!

Thank you General-Zohd-A glorious day today, wouldn't you agree?

Here's Lookin' at You, Kid(do) 👁️

********

Returning to Reconstruct: A Reincarnation
On a Knight Like This (Dedicated to Puppy)

Sitting here biding my Time
There’s not much I can do
So I’ll make up some Rhymes

Is there any way to know
Where they’re originally from?
This Wellspring of Words...
How do they manage to come?

They just seem to POP OUT
After creeping into my mind
But I can’t stand this pursuit
It’s a waste of my Kind.

I just really want to BE….
With Bob, alone. Is he ever
Gonna call me, on the phone?

I know I've used and abused
Repeating Rhymes before
Rearranging chameleon lines
Exposes the primitive score

But at least these are
Not lines of drugs
I'd much rather wait
For a loving hug

They damaged My Souls
I knew I’d been had
Living this way
Is so terribly sad

But I had no other choice
No known visible safe way
I didn't want to go out to play

My heart has been fractured
It turned blood-river red
But you already know this
It's already been said

Senor, what are we waiting for?
Tell me, why won't you come?
It fills me with outrage and fury
And makes me feel so dumb

Lord, I’m destined to crack
Locked inside these abodes
Carrying incalculable pain
Under unbearable loads

Inhumanly born burdens
A crashing diseased weight
My life’s brutal pathways
A cruel crippling fate

I know I can sense it
In my Mind, in my Soul
Nothing gold can stay
We reached for the coal

You know it’s been written
I’m bound to explode...
I’m still expecting to lose it
And hit virgin road

I can't believe he's so Incredibly
Insane. It splits me apart
Like a smashed window pane

Like shards of broken glass,
Shredding the threads of My Skin
Tell me what in the world
Am I still trying to win?

Just who the hell is he?
And why should I “care?”
Why do I love him?
Why would I Dare?

If he still doesn't know
He's G-d’s biggest moron
He gets himself down
When he’s got the bore on

He's FILLED with anguish
Fear and self-doubt
Why does he sit
And think and pout?

Why not just do it
For once in your life?
Come back to me
And make me your Wife

I can't understand this
After so many long years
I almost could kill him
Or cut off all his ears

Why don't you want me?
Why won't you come?
I’m not happy at all
I'm not having fun

This is empty and stupid
And thoroughly lame ‒
I never wanted this
I don't care about fame

Just come be my baby
Come make me whole
You know it’s your duty
To repair my torn soul

You said you would do it
This is so painfully unfair
Prove that you want me
Show me that you care

After singing about me
Endlessly, year after year
Saying you still love me
That for me you shed tears

I’m reclining in bed now
But I was slouched at my desk
I told you everything with gusto
When I’d rather have had rest

But I was driven and pushed
I was trapped in a field
Of maggots, and magnets
To you I must yield

Please have mercy on me
You can beam up my soul
Let me be in Your dream
Make me your goal.

I’m shattered like Road Runner
“Come back to Me,” I say
It will be Absolute and Perfect
In G-d’s For-ever Way

A fresh Springtime’s blossom
A Love once again made new
A crystal spark that's ignited
Like Sinai’s glistening dew
Falling down from the heavens
To sustain the Chosen few

We could go on and on Eternally
My Longest-Lost Dear Sweet friend
But as long as we’re alive
As we’ve been instructed to bend
Here are these words of “ILY”
Which I’ve just got to send

These are my prayers to You
I know that you’re Hissing
You’re the only thing gone
You’re just what I’m missing

(And I'd so very much rather
Your Chapped lips to be Kissing...
...iykwimaityd….*NOT* 😉 🤣 😇 )

The High Priestess, H.C. 🔯
Queen of France 💋
Shabbat/Purim
3.23.2016

- “let’s get drrrunk!!!” HIGH FIVE!!!!

“Roll On….פסח!” By Delia (rev. by רחל)

OB Associations & The Holy Ghosts
(Spanish Harlem Queen Revisited)
Lost and Found: Serene, Blest Waitress: “WHO is Bob Dylan’s Wife” 💔🐧
A Knightmare on ELM Street – Finito La Commedia ?

Once Upon A Time

And so I sit and bear my wait
Not a glamourous life by far
Not some bunny-tailed playboy model
Or a Golden Globed celluloid star

The house is strangely still and quiet
Save for this whispering air
Gently cooling the living room down
Breathing soft and Finely Fair

Healing alone, in her cozy love-nest
Not an unwelcome soul in her midst
Will he come back? He keeps calling for her…
Is he bringing that Patagonia kiss?

22 Polished, scaled-down, Skeletal years
She waits On and On with Hope
May As well be Strangled and Tame
In a Perfect prison of Peace
Neck Mangled on a Dangling Tail Rope

Clowns all make their Home-Spun jokes
While writers share their poems.
A Solitary Place...
(Inside a crowded Northern Window 🔯 )
Just a Woman in her Home

Why bother yearning all thru’ The Hours?
Why persist in Pressing On? Round and
Around continues the Never-Ending Tour
A dream once shared now all but Gone…

How many more Long And Wasted Years
Must she work for her Memory’s Man?
The Catch now seems Pointless 🧙🏻
Dont try to Anoint us ‒ Engineers
Sweeping‒up Time in the sand

Our Beaches are filled
With Bodies of Dis‒Ease
Is Humankind Ever Even...
OR At All what G‒d sees? /

A long drawn out sigh ‒
It almost doesn’t Matter
The Passion dies out
The Screams make it sadder

So Onward and UPward
Go along with your Game
No-thing has changed
The Song Remains the Same

Just a girl spinnin’ in bed
A-writin’ Singularly for Youse
Waitin’ unexplicably to Be‒gin’
ָAn’ reboot life’s Earth news

If this ain’t *Enough!*
If I’m not what ya Desire
Don’t Egg me with kindle
To Build UP A Fire

I’m tired and I’m worn
I’m beat and I’m through
Please Just come back
I’ve tried till I’m Blue ‒

I can’t wait no more
Can barely even cope
What a fool to believe in you
The world’s greatest Dope

So I’m here if you ever
Manage to wake yourselves UP
We can start over refreshed
From Heaven’s Drinking Cup

The Close of this ol’ Rime
Is beggin’ for me to Send
I just miss my best friend
And it’s soon t’ The‒End 🦉

From the Rich Rushin' Winds OF an On!on Star…

All My Love,
Rachel
🌟 jewsy froot🌟 🔯
🌟רואכח גולדה🌟 😵 🤪

3.15.24

(aside: Fuzzy Wuzzy Wuzn't Fuzzy Wuz Hee)(blurt!)

102 Waterfalls: Complicated Grief
A Cat‒cher in the Rye

Psychological Con‒Fuzzions
Are a curious thing...
It could be what happens
When MockingBirds Sing ‒

This isn’t a warning
It’s just what happened to me
And now that I’ve moved
I can’t ever be free

It follows you around
Like a bad rollercoaster ride
Technology runnin’ backwards
You’re trembling inside

They rattle your nerves
And wake up your head
It cuts you inside
But you know you’re not dead

They’re bellowing madly below
Screaming “Shut the fuck UP!”
I’m beginning to wish for
The balls to vote “TRUMP!”

About the story as we knew it
I no longer give a rat’s ass
I’m nobody’s martyr
I crawled through the glass

Their molecules can disperse
Up in the clouds for all I “care”
I’ve no need to rehearse
I’m hunting the Bear

The last thing you’re gonna
Hear out of me
Is my lesson I’ve learned
The truth I now see

It’s a sick ring of torture
Of ugliness and gloom
I left my Stingrays behind
And cast a cure for their Doom

Rachel
3.7.2024

slight syntactic re-arranging....(split/reversed order)

just so sorry