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Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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Subject: Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2024 19:05:38 +0000
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by: General-Zod - Fri, 29 Mar 2024 19:05 UTC

W.Dockery wrote:

> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>>
>>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>>
>>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>>> after the parade.
>>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>>
>>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>>
>>>>> They pass and fade
>>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>>
>>>>> On this really old wall
>>>>> good view from up here.
>>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>>
>>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>>> Is this a re-write?

>>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

>> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

> As another day dawns, I tend to agree.

Right on...

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